I know that feeling..doomed if I do, doomed if I don't
beautiful writing....the pic is so good apt to your poem :)
So great! Reminds me of those six word stories that Ernest Hemmingway did, and the haiku Magpies that I did (The Spectre, The Missing Key).Wanna see my Magpie? It's at http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com
A lovely yearning piece for a stunning photo!
awww that was beautiful
Stunning, both the photo and your writing.
Oh that last ship. I have actually watched a ship disappear and it really seems almost magical. Nice job
I love how the mast slips down, last out of sight... beautiful poetry, so full of longing
i feel her longing..nice write...
and i shall sigh on :)http://2short2sweet.blogspot.com/2010/10/day-3-heart-brings-you-back.html