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Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Microfiction Monday - #50


She watched the last ship
disappear over the horizon
wondering when she would see him again...
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11 comments:

  1. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 30, 2010 at 4:50 AM

    beautiful!

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  2. gautami tripathySeptember 30, 2010 at 7:02 AM

    I know that feeling..

    doomed if I do, doomed if I don't

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  3. Uma AnandaneSeptember 30, 2010 at 8:38 AM

    beautiful writing....the pic is so good apt to your poem :)

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  4. batsickSeptember 30, 2010 at 12:43 PM

    So great! Reminds me of those six word stories that Ernest Hemmingway did, and the haiku Magpies that I did (The Spectre, The Missing Key).

    Wanna see my Magpie? It's at http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com

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  5. Tumblewords:September 30, 2010 at 2:24 PM

    A lovely yearning piece for a stunning photo!

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  6. alexSeptember 30, 2010 at 6:09 PM

    awww that was beautiful

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  7. ReflectionsSeptember 30, 2010 at 10:26 PM

    Stunning, both the photo and your writing.

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  8. Kristen HaskellOctober 1, 2010 at 10:40 AM

    Oh that last ship. I have actually watched a ship disappear and it really seems almost magical. Nice job

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  9. UnknownOctober 1, 2010 at 2:11 PM

    I love how the mast slips down, last out of sight...

    beautiful poetry, so full of longing

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  10. Brian MillerOctober 2, 2010 at 4:58 PM

    i feel her longing..nice write...

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  11. Divaa DivineOctober 3, 2010 at 11:20 PM

    and i shall sigh on :)

    http://2short2sweet.blogspot.com/2010/10/day-3-heart-brings-you-back.html

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