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Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Microfiction Monday - #50


She watched the last ship
disappear over the horizon
wondering when she would see him again...

11 comments:

  1. beautiful writing....the pic is so good apt to your poem :)

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  2. So great! Reminds me of those six word stories that Ernest Hemmingway did, and the haiku Magpies that I did (The Spectre, The Missing Key).

    Wanna see my Magpie? It's at http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com

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  3. A lovely yearning piece for a stunning photo!

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  4. Stunning, both the photo and your writing.

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  5. Oh that last ship. I have actually watched a ship disappear and it really seems almost magical. Nice job

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  6. I love how the mast slips down, last out of sight...

    beautiful poetry, so full of longing

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  7. i feel her longing..nice write...

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  8. and i shall sigh on :)

    http://2short2sweet.blogspot.com/2010/10/day-3-heart-brings-you-back.html

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